by Bailey Standaloft 

Tom

 

 Gates

hi my name is tom gates. i

 

wish school started at eleven

 

o'clock in the morning not at

 

quarter to nine.[wich is to

 

early for me] im rubbish at

 

getting up at time. it takes

 

me ages to get my brain

 

working even longer for my

 

eyes to get open. 

one friday morning at school, mr 

 

fullerman was telling everbody about, 

 

the activity trip next week. "what" to

 

be honest, i never knew anything

 

about an activity trip. so i told mr 

 

fullerman if i could still bring it in a 

 

note that i hope he will give me. "Did

 

you loose your note again tom?" so mr

 

fullerman gave me another note and 

 

told me bring it as soon as possible and

 

aspecially not to lose it.

 

 

 arfter school, i walked home with my

best friend [derik] and i was hoping i 

 

wouldent loose the note otherwise

 

i would get into trouble, when we got 

 

home i got my mum to sign the note 

 

for camp she signed it so i got 

 

permission to go. 

 

 

on saturday we went to the 

 

supermarkets to buy things for 

 

the school activity trip.and we 

 

bought all of this toilet paper that i

that i wont need for the activity 

 

trip. so i just went home.

 

 

as we get home i search for the 

 

note in my bedroom and i find it

 

under my bed so it means i can

 

go.

its been nearly a whole week since

 

mr fullerman gave me another note

 

form to fill out wich must still be still

 

in my room somewhere as we drive

 

home my mom tells not to worry she

 

says that you can do about it now

 

tom fill it in when we get back.

its finally the day of the activity 

 

trip i handed the note in right on

 

this day so i could go.so i 

 

hopped on the bus and went off

 

it took three hours to get to to 

 

the activity trip.

it is the first day for the activity

 

trip first we done rock climing 

 

and i fell off the wall and i hurt 

 

my ankle.then we done canoeing

 

but i fell in to the water and got 

 

bitten by a fish.as it came to the

 

end of the day so i went to sleep

 on the last day i did archery first

 

i almost got hit by an arrow then

 

i did the flying fox it felt like i

 

was going to fall off so thats the

 

end of the activity trip.